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Gift for *PearlyPony
YES!! AGAIN!!! RhYthm is here, just for you!! I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw you bought me a subbie again so I couldn't resist drawing for you again! I hope this turned out OK Thank you, Mel, again! RhYthm (c) *PearlyPony Art (c) *eldery (Rebeka Bőgner '09) NOREF 8D DO NOT STEAL, COPY OR HEAVILY REFERENCE. Comments
I think you're really good at drawings wings x3! Looks really stunning indeed o3o Very beautiful tail, and the sunset is such a nice background to use for RhYthm <3! Nice done
-- .:The air gets filled with feathers... It's a sign... The featherwolf is here...:. .: Thanks to ~nightmareah=Pharaonenfuchs and =Jakaru666 for my icons <3! This is beautiful and very well proportioned. I love the leg poses and expression. Great job, I love this!
-- Fabulous avvie made by the fabulous ~Kimptone |
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August 9, 2009
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Critiques
I love the effort you put into drawing the feathers on the inside of the wing however you should put just as much effort into drawing the back of the wing instead of leaving it solid.
The shading looks great however I would soften the edges of the highlighted areas like under the belly. It would simply give it a more rounded look, at least to my eyes.
The feathering on the legs looks good. The only thing about the mane and tail that looks off to me is that the horse seems to be moving forward but the mane looks like its moving up and back. The tail says it is moving forward. I would suggest that in future work you put arrows in when you're drawing so you know which way the wind is blowing and you can put the mane and tail both blowing in the same direction.
Overall this is a fantastic piece. Keep up the good work!
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