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Gift for *PearlyPony:hug:
YES!! AGAIN!!! RhYthm is here, just for you!! I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw you bought me a subbie again so I couldn't resist drawing for you again! :glomp:
I hope this turned out OK :) I enjoy drawing wings more and more :D
Thank you, Mel, again! :iconnewglomp:

RhYthm (c) *PearlyPony
Art (c) *eldery (Rebeka Bőgner '09)
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:icondlnarielle:
This looks amazing! The background is simple enough to not drag the eye away from the subject of the picture but not simple enough to take away from the picture's quality.

I love the effort you put into drawing the feathers on the inside of the wing however you should put just as much effort into drawing the back of the wing instead of leaving it solid.

The shading looks great however I would soften the edges of the highlighted areas like under the belly. It would simply give it a more rounded look, at least to my eyes.

The feathering on the legs looks good. The only thing about the mane and tail that looks off to me is that the horse seems to be moving forward but the mane looks like its moving up and back. The tail says it is moving forward. I would suggest that in future work you put arrows in when you're drawing so you know which way the wind is blowing and you can put the mane and tail both blowing in the same direction.

Overall this is a fantastic piece. Keep up the good work!
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:iconpurpleshadowbooster:
Wow the wing look awesome :3

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Beautiful work hun! :glomp:
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Omg, this is stunning, Becca! :wow:
The wings are just soo pretty! :love:
Well, do you feel happy about this drawing? You have to! :omg: So epic! :love:

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I love it :love:
he looks so handsome :)

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oh, lol, never mind, Second!
:iconfeatherwolf-pluma:
I think you're really good at drawings wings x3! Looks really stunning indeed o3o Very beautiful tail, and the sunset is such a nice background to use for RhYthm <3! Nice done :clap:!!

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This is beautiful and very well proportioned. I love the leg poses and expression. Great job, I love this!

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:iconjelly-been:
oh wow, amazing job!
your so right, youve improved soooooo much drawing and painting wings :love:






... i so want your skills xD

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:iconkatusia:
Very eyecatching indeed :nod: Especially these shiny hair of his. :giggle:

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Thank you! :hug:

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